YES!
YES!!! YES!!! Defenetly yes :)
That was a really nice piece of music :)
The atmosphere was just incredible. I was expecting something commercial, but when i heard it i was like *WTF!*
All in all it was bery nice :)
I anly have a few suggestions.
Try adding in some hard synth leads.
Amd also i think that i nice hat beat would suit it nicely
Other than that it was great :)
Cyaz
DarkAngel out...
thx Man I will I have alot more stuff on the way. good to see at leats someone likes my stuff. thx for the suggestions
Hmmm
hey :) that sounds prety good :)
Exept for the constant buzz... it was sorta painfull :)
You should really make it into a song, or atleast make it loop more smoothly.
I wish more people would review my music even if they are bad
Any way those buzz noises are ment to be there they shoudlnt be to load unless you dont have a subwoofer becuase if you dont the buzz is just goin though your treble, Im 80% sure.
Thanks for reviewin.
Hmm... lets see...
It's medievil times...
At the begining i see a army, prepearing to go to battle. Man leaving their homes, children and wifes. Woman crying, beging them not to go. I see a man picking up his sword, putting on his armor. Kissing his wife good bye. She is in bed, nut she isn't sleeping, she only sheds tears and says nothing.
Then....
I see an army, people with swords, lances, bows, horses armor. And a king speaking to them. They pound on the ground with their weapond.
Shealds crash.
Then darkness...
I woman, staying at home, crying... her children sleep... she is praying to god..
Then again darkness...
A Then... i see 2 army's on two hills.
Thousands of thousand of people. Their kings stand infront of them, turn to them. then
SCREAMS, everyone rushes... and in seconds they clash...
Darkness...
A single man lives... he lays on the ground covered in blood... in his arm he holds the picture of his wife, he sheds a tear...
Then darkness forever...
I dont really know how to leave a constructive review :)
I loved it...
DarkAngel out...
My friend, you have seen a great story, I am glad, then my piece was not a failure.
I was thinking a similar scene while constructing the piece.
Many many thanks for your review, it has made my day ^^.
0.0 aaa....
0.o o.0 x.X X.x
What THE!!!
This sounds WAY to profesional.
Are you a signed musician by any chance??
Anywayz
I can't really leave a constructive review, it's like critisizing Cave or Balthazar... not gonna happen :)
Anywayz this song goes into my playlist
Cyaz
DarkAngel out...
5/5
Thnks for the reply, wish people would leave a message some more often so that I konw what people at NG looking for. Creative for already 11 year with digital music, its just a silly hobby, not amateur, nor proffie... I think somewhere between ;).
Nice
The song was ok.
I kind of got the idea of where you wanted to go with this, but i felt like you lacked mood, inspiaration or samples.
Am i right?
Anywayz :)
The song was nice, the idea behind it was solid, but i think that it could use some work.
Try addind some envoloping texture to it, it sounds a little dry (But that is only my opinion)
The current work was nicely put together NOTHING was out of place, everything was where it was ment to be.
Also one more suggestion from me, try adding in a smooth synth lead.
That's all i'm giving it a 5 but you should really work on it. I would love to hear it when it's finished :) (if you plan to work on it that is)
Cyaz
DarkAngel out
Thanx, smooth synth lead and envelope.
Alot of my new songs lately havn't been at least decent so that they could be posted, might have an easier time going back and working on improving this a little.
Hmm
hey there,
The begining got me listening.
All in all the song was nicely put together but it was a tad slow.I've got a few suggestions that might help
Try adding a reverb and/or delay on the guitar
Also you should try to add a synth lead that shold make the song a little more energetic.
Al in all it was a nice piece, but it really need some work.
Cyaz
DarkAngel out...
Well...
Hey there,
Hmm.... that was strangly atractive :)
But the piano sounded horrible, u really should try to tweek it a little.
Btw the fast DnB part was very VERY nicely put in. Try adding in a DnB beat there 2.
The piece will be great if you put a little more effort into it.
And tweek that piano it horrible! :)
Cyaz
DarkAngel out...
Lol yeah this is strage Thats all i have to say. lol
Umm...
Hey there,
Umm... man... i think i... HATE YOU!!! :)
How do you come up with stuff like this?
The entire thing was awsome, in my opinion this is worthy of a metropolis, or rave.
It just sends you into space you know :)
The beat was owsome, fast background bass, the synth was even nicer.
The moaning in the background was a really REALLY nice touch.
I have that sample btw but i have never managed to use it, it didnt fit anywhere, but it was just in place here :)
When the flute came in i was like *MAAAN this guy is crazy* :)
All in all i loved it :)
You should really make a song out of this, it will sound great :)
Cyaz
DarkAngel out
*Clicky clicky 5*
I sent myself into space with it O_o.
heh in all honesty though, I just wanted to stop working on it, week went by, my brain was getting cluttered with too much other music, STUFF HAD TO BE DONE! I have a nasty habit of not returning to pieces I stop working on so I HAD to finish this.
As for the flute, I think its time Techno and Classical joined hands and united!
NICE
Hey there,
ROFL gaytarded i really gotta remember that one :) i know how you feel bro, but atleast they download some of the mother fuckers vote 0 without even listening to the song :) anywayz
That was really nice, vocals were awsome, the drummer is mad :) but i really hated the piano, NOT the melody, but the sound of it, it really needs ajustment.
Gave you clarity of 5 couse the qualityt of the guitar was a tad off...
Other than that, it is a very nice piece
Cyaz
DarkAngel out...
yeah, I don't care that they vote 0... but at least say what the fuck they don't like about it. even if it's just the fact that it has growling vocals or what ever I don't care but at least have a reason before you fuck with someone. but thanks for the 5 and sorry if the piano didn't sound good I do everything on headphones and my computer sucks so I have to export everything and listen to it then go back and make adjustments and all that... not that I'm making excuses, but that's why I have to rely on other people's input so much... cause I can't hear if the quality is good or bad on my shitty setup... everything comes out a bit tinny on my end.
Nice, very nice
Hi,
That was a realy nice hipnotizer, i liked it
Only one, try adding some background fill noises loops, mods,flybys anything
I know there is one but still...
Besides that the song was awsome
Cyaz
DarkAngel out...
I would have put more work into this but I needed it right away for production purposes. Thanks!
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